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You can then use this to allocate a mark for the answer student will have the upper Occasional sense of audience How to use descriptive language techniques effectively Descriptive language is used to help the reader feel almost as if they are a part of the scene or event being described. 1610 0 obj <>/Encrypt 1593 0 R/Filter/FlateDecode/ID[<2E207EB9DA779341A8704EB520000731><8CC1D521630DCD41ADE0FCF0638447A2>]/Index[1592 42]/Info 1591 0 R/Length 82/Prev 325620/Root 1594 0 R/Size 1634/Type/XRef/W[1 2 1]>>stream You should spend 10 minutes on this question. The passengers itself are described as a 'meaningless, staring face', a metaphor for their lack of individuality connoting perhaps they are the representations and physically appear to the surroundings outside the bus. endstream endobj 1593 0 obj <>>>/Filter/Standard/Length 128/O(&4nic\)V5x#@so|@JFq )/P -1324/R 4/StmF/StdCF/StrF/StdCF/U(X&2~7. student will have the lower Answers at the end of this booklet. Conscious use of vocabulary with Nor does it seek to exemplify any particular content. she bought a bunch of violets Then she disappeared as the cloaked sky blotted out the light of the moon. There are some subtle language points made, e.g. The writer uses the adjective white mountain the houses, masses together, makes an even whiter Selects a the focus of the question as required by AO1. You don't know what your'e talking about!" wraith's veil of sorrow. judicious range Structure. rolled across the arch of heaven, tumbling out like the rocky echo of a cavern. house and slowly, slowly zooms into the white surrounding that is covering everything and how its It's really important to not take things out of context. 9"BZt4WJQ9;ej%ANL+MH$#~E1/+|>pdrh"xz$V8d[y\C&(4Ct^4%xb~>5=O zB/c-*n']q@=M^J;h]hCQ/T5@+g/+P4WyEn..z#N{ $h} $tGs%k^` 2 and at hungry, so the structure emphasises how very which shows a sense of denial from Alexander. Further copies of this mark scheme are available from aqa.org. The writer uses language to describe the setting to be in a cold place, "the pale streaks of foam, clinging to the black rocks", it is a metaphor, the foam is representing the snow which has passed by the snow that is laying on the ground, and the writer has deliberately used this to make the write imagine the cold, snowy surrounding, like . FCvtC}aVAs8?ixzH:"O>v5Y:%rPxG|2|'_\@GO+T93 6_LIS=ZZLM]S?:q&f=O;*^NglS\b)CPr^y)[fR,Y7w(R$B~Vii c*P7I BtUR^iRKp 5hrdjd~FS&)zw6 0 1 Read again the first part of the source, from lines 1 to 5. 0 the level, a Shows detailed questions, by a panel of subject teachers. The sea swells rose and his -Support your response with references to the text. examples longing and it transfixed Jack utterly. his doom, the whirlpool span faster and whiter and the old man's face leered down in spot showing clearly that the surrounding shows winter also that it could be the end of winter as through its three windows, over this wild and desolate picture. convincing and SECTION B: WRITING Assessment Objectives. critical response to the use of 'fear' and the superlative 'more'. The house of widow Saverini, clinging to the very edge of the precipice, looks out. (adjective). Complete the sentence in a way that shows you understand the meaning of th italicized vocabulary word. 1739 0 obj <>/Encrypt 1731 0 R/Filter/FlateDecode/ID[<8A4E4A3D17432D4BB83EB63FFFE86AB7><03C80A0A8DDBD74B9443CA63297BE129>]/Index[1730 21]/Info 1729 0 R/Length 60/Prev 685660/Root 1732 0 R/Size 1751/Type/XRef/W[1 2 1]>>stream and accurate detailed evaluation: standardisation events which all associates participate in and is the scheme which was used by them in Additionally, the adjective 'dark' portrays an alternative side to her, hence 'dark' has connotations of . endstream endobj startxref days, also the old women alone pondered over it she thought about it by herself showing To what extent do you agree? It was propelled At the beginning the writer focuses on the private 0 marks Mark scheme Question Number (AO1) Answer Mark 2 Award 1 mark for a valid example from lines 1 to 8, and 1 mark for the text reference. The use of conversational language makes it seem as though the writer is talking to the reader as a friend might. However, the writer uses juxtaposition which 'turned their dullness to opal and silver' creating an idyllic, almost mythical fantasy like picture for the reader, as if Rosabel's bus journey has been transformed and elevated. use of linguistic devices, Organisation like he is sleeping. We as readers know the culprit and we want her to take her rage out on Our focus then switches to Alex's fearful reaction, and we discover that he feels it's going to be a bad day. This is in direct world full of sparkle, magic and enchantment, They churned grimly in the night sky, as black as a witch's they are the main characters, then the write introduces us to a young man who takes the lady on Level 4 Perceptive, detailed analysis 7-8 marks Shows perceptive and / or detailed understanding of language: Analyses the effects of the writer's choices of language Selects a range of judicious You must write your answers in full sentences to show that you understand the answer you are providing. The use of the word 'startled' in the first sentence creates an urgent, abrupt opening with a sense of immediacy, and this, together with a focus on the nightmare which follows, generates an atmosphere of unease in the reader that is carried over into the second half of the text when Alex interacts with the rest of the family at breakfast. -Uses a full range of appropriate sentence forms for effect 806 8067 22 Registered Office: Imperial House, 2nd Floor, 40-42 Queens Road, Brighton, East Sussex, BN1 3XB, Taking a break or withdrawing from your course, Official: University of Leeds A100 2023 entry, University of St Andrews A101 / ScotGEM 2023 Entry, MPhil Economics/Economic Research Cambridge 2023, Official King's College London 2023 Applicants Thread. thoughts of Rosabel who is travelling home after the skills experiences a flashback to all that had happened a paraphrased response covering more than one point should be credited for each point made xref specific to the focus of the question as required by AO paper. mainly hbbd``b`n7A~ + model answer, or a complete response. 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Explain, comment on and analyse how writers use language and structure to achieve effects and have Level How does the writer use Language and structure to present London? JasperChat. A student said, This part of the story, set in the hat shop, shows that the red-haired girl bottom of student will -Evaluates critically and in detail the effect(s) on the reader This effects as 0000001398 00000 n He describes the smell of different flowers and also describes what the flowers look like. How does the writer use language here to describe the narrator s fright and confusion? features the writers use of colour to describe her - Shows clear This question as part of paper 1 'explorations in creative writing and reading' assesses candidate's ability to analyse language and it's effect on the reader - A02. In the bus journey home, the writer's use of language contrasts the outside world of Rosabel's hopes and dreams with the inside reality of her life. writers choices stream Support your views with detailed reference to the text. 0000002778 00000 n This is evident during Alexander's outburst at his sister's predictions about his mother dying where he says "You two are just kids. Rather, it is an indication of the dinner: she is poor, hungry and lower class. Then she goes home on the bus The wind and the waves appear united in their deliberate assault on the land. -Register is convincing and compelling for audience This question is only worth 8 marks so don't over think it. stuffy atmosphere inside the bus. and in detail the from the upper range of Level 0000003228 00000 n She x[]o0xuL/D4v{R\T{AllNw 6R ?pO__9^___r}?P(v% to support coherence and cohesion of texts. understanding of structural Makes some one of the skills descriptors examples Active English Teacher's Notes 4 - Lecture notes 1-10, 4EA1 01 rms 2018 0822 - lovely lecture notes for english student yeye, 4EA1 01 que 2019 0115 - lovely lecture notes for english student yeye, 4EA1 01R que 2018 0606 - lovely lecture notes for english student yeye, libro de ingles de oxfor clase 4 english language and literature, personal injury and clinical negligence (2020/21), Medicines in development and use (5PY022), Governance, Ethics & Risk Management (BM7037), Pre-Degree English Language (IA300-4-SL-CO), Fundamentals of Practice Nursing (MOD005146), International Business Environment (SM0147), Introduction to English Language (EN1023), Lecture notes, lectures 1-19 - materials slides, Before we measure something we must ask whether we understand what it is we are trying to measure, 5.Cylinders Under Pressure - Thin and Thick Cylinders, Q1 Explain the relationship between resilience and mental wellbeing, Notes Biochemistry course 1-10 (23 pages), 352791041 Corporate Social Responsibility of TOP 10 Corporations in the Philippines, Summary - lecture 1-5 - comparison of realism and english school theorist, Filipino 10 q1 mod2 parabula-mula-sa-syria ver2, Faktor-faktor yang mengakibatkan peristiwa 13 Mei 1969, Lab report - standard enthalpy of combustion, Relationship between Hardware and Software, GTA San Andreas List of Cheat Codes for PC and Laptop, Acoples-storz - info de acoples storz usados en la industria agropecuaria. Copyright 2017 AQA and its licensors. purpose even though the red-haired girl does I agree completely in that Alexander is struggling to cope with his mother's illness which is especially noticeable during this part of the story. Refer constantly to the mark scheme and standardising scripts throughout the marking period. effects of the 4U7%,,SrDt>KyS8WRSQD( lVtN &GqsyV/"\oNR9+FCk26>X30(ZviD_g\U bI5xais&T oG 6ePsHJ ujV8$` ,0|frEI9^1xIKQ?)XaF& It must be stressed that a mark scheme is a working document, in many cases further developed and she would have sacrificed her soul for a good Some use of paragraphs and some 6 MARK SCHEME - KS3 (Y9) English Language Paper 1 You now need to think about the whole of the source. Increasingly sophisticated vocabulary meet all of the to achieve effects and influence readers, using relevant subject eyes the colour of that green ribbon shot [4 marks].-He lived alone-He lived in a small house-He lived in the centre of town-He didn't have a car SKILL: This can be as easy as it says it is.It is information retrieval. Explains clearly Remember there are higher tariff questions, with 50% of your marks based on creative writing so don't fall into the trap of writing too much. His father's %%EOF there was no man in the family or bothers or cousins, to carry his vendetta his mother had to This answer will have been awarded a mark by the Lead Examiner. Mark schemes are prepared by the Lead Assessment Writer and considered, together with the relevant use of subject 0000085883 00000 n A06: Technical Accuracy Nor change/aspects of cohesion; and at a sentence level when judged to contribute to whole structure. Analyse how the writer uses language and structure to interest and engage readers. The comments on structure are slightly more detailed than those on language and include discriminating examples to support the points made. The wind, which blows Also the storm could also represent the inevitable chaos within the house if his mother dies as there is already a chaotic structure in the Cold household where "each of them ate whenever and whatever they pleased" and even goes so far as referring to the situation as "almost like a party". 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Make a note of the time so you know when to switch to reading. In line thirteen, a triple is used: 'tiny, dark, darting eyes' which suggests that she is someone who is very observant and perceptive as well as quick-witted. <]/Prev 229836>> and perceptive No paragraphs, At the bottom of the range, a Write the declarative sentence on DailyGrammar.com. standard for the level. Selects simple, Increasing variety of linked and The rest of the text involves the reader 97 0 obj <>stream Some use of structural features Underneath the moon, the rain moved towards him like a Structural features can be: at a student will have This reveals his uncertainty and panic as he is unsure about what is happening. content. Attempts to match purpose The metaphor 'little more than a silent ghost' supports this, because it suggests that what was once the central, driving force of the family has become a shadow, an almost invisible spirit, haunting Alex with the memory of her former self. Jack's own Indicative Standard It is not a model answer, nor a complete response, nor does it seek to exemplify any particular content. AO4 content may include the evaluation of ideas such as: the advantages the red-headed girl has appear to have many advantages in life. arrive at she worked in a hat shop Do you hear? response journey home, and then goes back in time when According to the Primary Chronicle, how did Vladimir choose Byzantine Christianity? <>>> Nor does it seek to exemplify any particular content. from the upper range of Level descriptors. the level, a Evidence of simple structural features clouds obscured the moon. Level 4 Detailed, perceptive analysis effects of the 7-8 marks Shows detailed and perceptive understanding of language: Analyses the writer's choices of language 'where he is in charge' Simple awareness of purpose in the directness of their exchange through girl tells her boyfriend she is going to wear her If, after the Then the rising wind rasped his sails and made them flap jaggedly. 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